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Name of photographer - alyssa shuckar 2006
General focus of portfolio (photo j, sports, stories, etc.)- story of a girl with an eating disorder
List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio - the photogrpher didnt really capture the emotional aspect of her disorder, and they said each picture is a little similar distance wise.not enough strong snaps
List two things the judges like-they liked the picture of the Haiti man sweeping, and the girl who fell
What is your overall impression? What did you like or not like?
i thought it was kinda scattered like they pictures didnt really relate.

Name of photographer - Travis Haughton
General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)- it was a story about a young boy with some kind of disorder and he would show how he was just like the other kids
List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio - elements like that are sticking out of certain subjects looking akward, also missing things that would make the picture better
List two things the judges like- they liked the sports pictures of the coach and of the baseball player
What is your overall impression? What did you like or not like? yeah i liked it



Name of photographer -Jordan Murph_
General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)-His main focus is sports, although, he puts a few random pictures in the portfolio. Plus, he has a photo story, but most of the photos are weak.
List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio -They didn't like the random picture if the wave. well, they liked it, but it just didn't go with the subject he was  presenting.
They also didn't like how he had a picture of a man with his eyes closed. they were worried, bc he satrted off doing so well, and he just started slacking off.They didn't like the end photos very well at all. There is one where he too a picture of a signed CD. that , they didn't like.
List two things the judges like- They liked the beginning photos. They really like the first one with the volleyball player.they like the composition in some of the photos.
What is your overall impression? What did you like or not like? i liked it

Name of photographer - Dustin Snipes
General focus of portfolio (photoj, sports, stories, etc.)-His main focus was sports, and there was no photo shoot, just shots he took.
List three problems that the judges note with the portfolio - They said that the photo of the baseball player's face that is framed by something was maybe a little too much Photo shopped.The photo of the swimmers (the first one), they said it was fine, but the top swimmer that was blurred made the photo weaker.The second photo of the swimmers, they said it was chaos, but they liked it.
List two things the judges like-They liked the photo of the man smiling with the bow tie.
They also like the photo of the football players stretching.





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What did the judges note as strengths as they were critiquing it?
they liked all of his pictures they especially liked how the photographer was right there in the mix of everything
What do you see as strengths? Do you see any weaknesses? oh there were a lot of strengths he really knew his composition rules because i could point out some really good framing and repletion


Briefly describe the process the judges went through in deciding the winner.
they went through if the pictures ment something, or if they were randomly put in there  they wanted the stories in the portfolios to be good and they weren't.


PART II

1. Describe one photo that you agree with the judges on. Explain why you and the judges do or do not like it. I like it but the last picture was kinda weird but i do agree with the judges
2. Describe one photo that you do NOT agree with the judges on. Explain why you think the judges are wrong. Well the last ones that they liked that i did not is not something i like and the bottom shot was wierd i dont know maybe if it was higher up